Comment: Condolences to the family.
Differently, this is really poor journalism. firstly, the reader has no idea where in St Kitts they went diving, Pump Bay, Cockleshell Bay, Newtown Bay, Half Moon Bay. We do not know.
There is mention of 2 other persons. Who are they? Are they missing too? or is only Mr Hodge missing?
Then the search? is it called off? Is it ongoing? That leaves the reader hanging
The statement about his second to last daughter's birthday is totally awkward. pl rephrase |